Darthfett's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Wi Wa Wabbits]

Wow

Wow, that was actually quite good. The drawings were fantastic, and it was pretty smooth for being a first. :)

I'll list a few of the negatives here to help you improve:
-The top and bottom had a black strip, which made it look bad since the window was not fit to the right size.
-The fading in/out was a little overused
-The text wasn't displayed for long enough. I'm a pretty fast reader, and I barely had time to read it a few of the times.
-Storyline/script could use a bit of work, it was a little bit confusing through the text, though understandable through just the images.

Other than those points, you did a fantastic job on this! :D

lilpixiefluff responds:

hey :) thanks for your advice! i will take it onboard! i agree with you on the text! and the fadeins! hopefully in my next animation i will use less text and try and animate the characters more :)

[Depressed Lemmings]

Some nice ideas. Just need practice is all.

Well, I found the secret video, and I KNOW THE SONG!! I've heard it in Roller Coaster Tycoon, what is the original name for that ?! :D

The movie had a good theme to it, but I really thought you could've added more of a story. The music didn't fit it at all, just something to listen to while watching?

For the music, I probably would've chosen something that gave the essence of a constant state of aching, to give the viewer the feeling of the lemmings.

Great ending idea though, 'You saved 0%'

FireHound responds:

I think the original name of the song is "Drunken Sailor"
But there was a story... kinda... And you didn't think the music fit? I thought it was nearly perfect for the movie :(
I'll think it a bit harder about the choice next time then :)
Thanks for the review