Score: 10

"You're ALMOST there."

submission: New Stuff Demo

date: August 23, 2008

Wow, this is strange, but I can hear a lot of potential. It reminds me of a lot of good songs, that need just a tiny bit more smoothing out before being finished.

Keep working on it, you're ALMOST there! :D

Score: 10

"WOW, very nice!!"

submission: UGO - Universe is Dancing

date: July 12, 2008

Wow, this shows that you have music talent, even if you aren't perfect with the software. I'm giving this a 10 solely to help you get further on this site. You definitely need to keep working with FL Studios, and keep getting better with it.

A few things I'll say about why I normally would give this about an 8 is that it isn't very full in my ears. (at the 2:43 mark it gets better, but before that, it is missing something). You also used a drumloop, which is bad unless you use the slicer tool to mix it up a lot.

The kick should have been more powerful as well, I thought.

Great work!! Lovely melody!

~Darthfett

Score: 1

"MIDI RIP takes no effort."

submission: Power Rangers

date: July 11, 2008

I give you one star, because that's how much a midi rip is worth.

Next time, if you're going to make a remix, make it something different than the original song.

Another tip is not to use presets.

Score: 10

"LOL!"

submission: Pokemon Sinnoh Pokerap (FULL)

date: July 10, 2008

LOL. The pokemon world is full of uncreative and hard to pronounce pokemon.

Good job making a parody of the sellout pokemon has become.

:D

Score: 8

"Love the drone"

submission: Royal Secret

date: July 7, 2008

I don't really know what I should call the strings that are droning on in the background, but I like them.

It obviously needs a work, but It's quite nice sounding. I didn't really like the synth you chose for the bells. It got a little bit on my nerves, and I felt something else could have worked better instead of bells.

The words that come to mind while I listen to this are "bad news" because when I hear this, I think of impending doom or something bad is about to happen, and this is just something that spells out the word war.

An epic battle is about to begin.

Score: 9

"Nice song, but not your best. :)"

submission: Entrance Me (Original Mix)

date: July 7, 2008

"The title has multiple reasons. Some more apparent then others. Can you figure out why I named it "Entrance Me"?"

Your eyes entrance me. A phrase that means these songs are dedicated to someone special? :) Also, entrance has the word trance in it, which is the genre of both songs (and much more of your music).

Well anyway, on to the review of your ssoonnggggg.................--------!

It didn't have too much really new to it. It was a bit repetitive, and none of the synths really caught my attention. The tune wasn't very memorable either, compared to your other songs.

However, compared to most NG songs, this is still great quality, and definitely worthy of 4.5. I really liked the spikes of lightning in the very beginning, but they seemed to end after the intro, which was a little bit disappointing.

I liked the feel that it created of being in an outdoor shelter. The storm is just outside, and you can reach out and feel the rain, but you're under an overhang.

It reminded me of a christian concert I went to in Boston, which ended with one of my favorite bands playing during a storm. The entire crowd was outside, on a hill, and when the band quit playing, we all had to stand under canopies, to get out of the mud and rain. ;P

Thanks for reading, lol.

Score: 7

"Ooh."

submission: Starfurry Cornya Rmx

date: July 1, 2008

It doesn't sound terrible. In fact, I like the synth that plays the original tune from Star Fox. Great game, and it had some great music. :)

You can hear some realistic (non-acidy) VG-ish sounds in there too, but they're kind of quiet.

Normally I would probably vote low on something like this, but it uses a good tune, even if the synths don't flow well.

Score: 10

"Sounds great!"

submission: Whistle Song-Pulsing AnthM Mix

date: July 1, 2008

I haven't heard either mix, but here's my opinion.

I love the hihat you have between the bass and snare. It gives it a mechanical feeling. :)

The synth is pretty much normal for trance, but that's good. I also love the bass in the intro. I was hoping it would come back in later on, but it kept quiet for the rest of the song. :(

Make sure you keep working on this!! :P

Score: 10

"Great theme!"

submission: Racing to First

date: June 30, 2008

Would work great as a flash menu theme for a racing game, I bet. :D

I love the loop of the guitar. It's really upbeat, and it reminds me of something you would hear in a stadium in the middle of a game of some sort.

If you're going to extend this, I would love to hear the beat completely breakdown right where the song ends :)

Keep it up!! :D
~Darthfett

Score: 10

"Serenity in a little takeout box"

submission: ++ Long Walk Home ++

date: June 29, 2008

A woman holds her child as she sings a lullaby. It's bed time. A wolf yawns, and the child's eyes starts to droop. He smiles at his mother, and she returns the smile.

Finally, the child shuts his eyes, and the mother hugs him to her chest, while she looks up at the stars. Slowly, the mother lays down, still hugging her child to her chest. Her eyelids start to droop, and she smiles, before she finally falls asleep to the sound of the wolves yawning at the moon.

That's the impression I got from your song. :) Great work, it's fun to actually be able to feel music.