Score: 10

"Nice work. :)"

submission: -Space pirates-

date: March 30, 2007

The name reminds me of Monkey Island, if you've ever played it (Old PC series, so probably not).
I can imagine this going to the background of one of the ghost pirate scenes, on the Ghost Ship.

Nice work. :)

Score: 10

"Lovely... Dark and Lovely"

submission: _-={Corrupted Matrimony}=-_

date: March 29, 2007

I can just imagine some older movie with this playing in the background. Probably during the wedding between a Demoness, and some poor slob who sold his soul. What a great theme you've set here! (As you have in all of your songs!! :D)
That background sound that comes in when the song quiets down sounds almost like part of a police siren, off in the distance. It's very unique :)

I'm curious though, i've been listening to a lot of your songs, and I found that you use FL pretty much as a base program. I've always wanted to make orchestra/classical style music, but i've never found the right kind of drums. I really like the way the timpany can add something that a simple kick or snare drum can't really do, but I don't know where to find them. Where did you get yours? :)

Great work on this piece! So far i've been getting a lot of NG music lately... I think I have more from you than any other artist... :P

I would say more about your music, but i'm just starting out. All I can Really say is that I love your music, and keep it up!!! =D

Score: 7

"Base Structure Down"

submission: Viktim - Blackened Reality

date: March 26, 2007

It sounds quite nice, throughout the song, but it lacks a lot. The 'drums' are mostly just a bunch of white noise. That got repetitive, and you could've done more.

Usually when I think of white noise, I think of the noise I hear on TV's, Radios, so basically Electronic stuff. Some blips, and beeps could've added some more, as well as some more electronic sounds.

I think you've got something going, but it's just the base structure. Keep working on this! :)

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Score: 10

"Insta-Download"

submission: -Field of memories-

date: March 26, 2007

That starting thunderclap in the beginning, with the light playful piano really set the mood for this one.

I just love songs that have... other sounds in them. They add to a song in their own way, because they have a realistic quality, and can bring up memories, and really make a song good and unique.

I didn't particularly think the drums that came in about halfway through fit well, but it's a minor thing. :)

Make it longer!! :D

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Score: 9

"Very Unique"

submission: d@rk !ndust!al sp33d

date: March 26, 2007

This is a cool song! :)

It's got a lot of the elements of trance in it, with the high pitched and futuristic synths, and the beats make it industrial sounding, as well as the (slightly) dark sounding notes.

This isn't the type of industrial, or trance you hear everyday, so it's very unique, compared to a lot of other music i've heard.

Great work on this!

Score: 8

"A bit repetitive"

submission: Gillenium Mini-Boss Fight

date: March 21, 2007

It sounds very much like a boss battle of some sort, but when it just winds over and over through the same sections over and over, it just doesn't make it as a boss battle theme. It needs a tune to come in!

I'm not suggesting you copy it, but maybe if you listen to some of the classic Final Fantasy Battle/Boss themes, you'll see what I mean.

They come in, similar to yours (but a little bit faster, with those tense-building background parts), and then they'll come in with a tune, that just fits in with the repetitive structure for a little bit, and then the whole structure will change every once in a while, and add a whole new tune.

You did a good job, with what you have so far, and i'm going to download it for learning purposes. (I still don't have down fast, battle type music, and i'd like to get better with them). But I really want to see a nice tune come in with a newer version!! :D 8/10 and 4/5.

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Score: 9

"Nice work! :D"

submission: Whats in the Metal Box?

date: March 19, 2007

This one's a pretty cool, with a nice intro for the 'metal'. However, your beats aren't very original. They sound nice, but they never change, and are very basic.

You have an ear for effects! :D

Score: 10

"Nice work!!"

submission: dark caves

date: March 18, 2007

This is definately a cave battle theme.

That bassline comes in perfectly, as well as the drums, with a cool effect just before. The zombie-ish moaning was a cool effect, and the song had enough energy to at any moment break down into a huge face-paced beat... that's an excellent ambient quality, making it kind of an ambient-industrial mix. Nice work!! :D

Funny way to end it. :P

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Score: 9

"You've got potential"

submission: Kill robot kill.

date: March 18, 2007

The song has body, but it doesn't seem like a full producer version, more like a Work-in-progress.

You've got a lot of potential for this song, as it's got enough to be a full song, but it needs more to give it that spark. You need similar channels that sync in well with everything, so that it fits in, like the last pieces to a puzzle. Great work on it altogether though. :D

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Score: 7

"Pretty cool"

submission: Centrifuge-Weird

date: March 18, 2007

It sounds like you're just using the default channels, with minor tweaks and effects. You need to bring in more of those. Your song seems to lack body because of it.

The tune is rather nice, and it's cool to listen to.

Work on it some more, and check out my stuff!