Neat.
Well, although I do like version 2 better, I thought this had some pretty cool sections and transitions to it. It was different.
I think that you should make a combination version, including a little of what's different in each song (the best parts), and make it into an ultimate mix.
Nice work, #2 is definitely worthy of best of the week.
At first I was confused.
At first I was confused, but then it got to 0:37. Then I was happy.
However, I am still waiting on version 101-600. YOU PROMISED.
You inspire me. Fav'd, 5'd, 10'd, Dl'd, etc.
You're ALMOST there.
Wow, this is strange, but I can hear a lot of potential. It reminds me of a lot of good songs, that need just a tiny bit more smoothing out before being finished.
Keep working on it, you're ALMOST there! :D
I'll be finishing 2 of these songs ;)
WOW, very nice!!
Wow, this shows that you have music talent, even if you aren't perfect with the software. I'm giving this a 10 solely to help you get further on this site. You definitely need to keep working with FL Studios, and keep getting better with it.
A few things I'll say about why I normally would give this about an 8 is that it isn't very full in my ears. (at the 2:43 mark it gets better, but before that, it is missing something). You also used a drumloop, which is bad unless you use the slicer tool to mix it up a lot.
The kick should have been more powerful as well, I thought.
Great work!! Lovely melody!
~Darthfett
i love when my music is critiziced!
well lets see...
it lacks of melody before the 'chorus' .. i know but i thought of doing a simple music
(maybe this is too simple ehehehe)
the 2:43 mark is the middle part (in spanish -my language- its called 'bridge'
i dunno if in english too)
an in these bridges i allways try to do more interesting the music, so it worked!! hehe
i didint understand why is it bad to use a drumloop! ... though i dont use them a lot
but i love oldschool-DnB rythms/drumloops and i decided to do a song with those.
i think the same about the kick... but sometimes ive problems when i EQ
bcause it ends to sound very noisy! and distorted (bcause of the noise)
thanks!!!! a lot
MIDI RIP takes no effort.
I give you one star, because that's how much a midi rip is worth.
Next time, if you're going to make a remix, make it something different than the original song.
Another tip is not to use presets.
LOL!
LOL. The pokemon world is full of uncreative and hard to pronounce pokemon.
Good job making a parody of the sellout pokemon has become.
:D
I hear Nintendo just trademarked the versions Opal and Quartz...
BUM BUM BUUUUMMMMMM.
Love the drone
I don't really know what I should call the strings that are droning on in the background, but I like them.
It obviously needs a work, but It's quite nice sounding. I didn't really like the synth you chose for the bells. It got a little bit on my nerves, and I felt something else could have worked better instead of bells.
The words that come to mind while I listen to this are "bad news" because when I hear this, I think of impending doom or something bad is about to happen, and this is just something that spells out the word war.
An epic battle is about to begin.
I need to foce myself to make a good classical song, I am capable of doing it, it just takes a different kind of effort to make it sound good lol.
Nice song, but not your best. :)
"The title has multiple reasons. Some more apparent then others. Can you figure out why I named it "Entrance Me"?"
Your eyes entrance me. A phrase that means these songs are dedicated to someone special? :) Also, entrance has the word trance in it, which is the genre of both songs (and much more of your music).
Well anyway, on to the review of your ssoonnggggg.................--------!
It didn't have too much really new to it. It was a bit repetitive, and none of the synths really caught my attention. The tune wasn't very memorable either, compared to your other songs.
However, compared to most NG songs, this is still great quality, and definitely worthy of 4.5. I really liked the spikes of lightning in the very beginning, but they seemed to end after the intro, which was a little bit disappointing.
I liked the feel that it created of being in an outdoor shelter. The storm is just outside, and you can reach out and feel the rain, but you're under an overhang.
It reminded me of a christian concert I went to in Boston, which ended with one of my favorite bands playing during a storm. The entire crowd was outside, on a hill, and when the band quit playing, we all had to stand under canopies, to get out of the mud and rain. ;P
Thanks for reading, lol.
Yeah I'll admit its not my best. This was just one of those songs where I needed to do something to feel a little better. You got the title idea right :P. Dedicated to someone special part, I dunno they dunno we all don't know its just that kind of thing you know. (It confuses me as much as that sentence does)
What I like about this song is the transition starting at 2:25 and ending at 2:32 I wanted to see if I could do a build a little more complex then some of my other songs.
Ooh.
It doesn't sound terrible. In fact, I like the synth that plays the original tune from Star Fox. Great game, and it had some great music. :)
You can hear some realistic (non-acidy) VG-ish sounds in there too, but they're kind of quiet.
Normally I would probably vote low on something like this, but it uses a good tune, even if the synths don't flow well.
Sounds great!
I haven't heard either mix, but here's my opinion.
I love the hihat you have between the bass and snare. It gives it a mechanical feeling. :)
The synth is pretty much normal for trance, but that's good. I also love the bass in the intro. I was hoping it would come back in later on, but it kept quiet for the rest of the song. :(
Make sure you keep working on this!! :P
Darn, now that you gave me that one idea, i might have to, lol.
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